poetry that probably no one will understand but my head.

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by the charismatic_enigma (Zone BBS Addict) on Saturday, 30-Jul-2011 21:20:58

When the time is yours
The time is gone.

When it feels so right
It’s on it’s way to wrong.

When you love so much
Can you always be sure?

That your love is a touch
That your love is a cure?

When you feel as if you’re hated
Will you make it through?

This unpredictable life
These unappreciated dues.

When you say what you feel
Will they look at you and laugh?

When you know what you’ve learned
Will they stab you in the back?

If you fall from where you’re standing
Will they try to make the save?

When you stand on what you’re saying
Will they listen as the road you pave?

When the time is yours
The future’s awaiting…
The person you become
The people you’re creating.

Post 2 by CrystalSapphire (Uzuri uongo ndani) on Sunday, 31-Jul-2011 2:06:17

i like it. sooooo true..

Post 3 by Shadow_Cat (I've now got the silver prolific poster award! wahoo!) on Sunday, 31-Jul-2011 10:31:19

I may not know what was in your own head as you wrote this, Faraaz, but it has its own resonance with me.